1. How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity
Paragraph unity here a paragraph
implies that it have
to needs an idea. Therefore, its explanatory
sentences that form paragraphs need to be laid
out carefully so that none of the
sentences that deviate from the main idea of
the paragraph. If there is a
sentence that deviates from the subject matter or the main idea of the
paragraph, the paragraph it becomes cohesive
and intact. Deviant
sentences should be repaired or removed
from paragraph.
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2. Tell more about coherence
Coherent paragraphs where
the paragraphs of explanatory sentences mutually sustainable. Good paragraph should
demonstrate a close relationship between sentences. Paragraphs are constructed from
sentences mean jumping the paragraph is not coherent or incoherent. If there is
no coherence (coherence), the mind leaps, serial para above is built on four sentences.
The first sentence of up to four interconnected because of the sequence of time
and place. The above description is one way that the sentence is structured in a
coherent paragraph. There are several ways we can do that the sentences in the
paragraph which we arrange into a coherent paragraph that is by repeating a
word or group of words that have previously been mentioned with a word or group
of words with the same or synonyms, and use the pointer word, this, such, that
is to say above, and the latter builds a sequence of ideas.
My Usual Self
Actually, I'm confused what should
describe about me. But I’ll try to
describe myself. Everything related to me both my strengths and my flaws. Any
excess will cover one of its weaknesses. Make your shortcomings as a motive better
to be your strong suit so much. A suburb regions of isolated
village is Mulya Asri Village, Tulang Bawang Barat of Regency which I
was born. My parents gave me name is Siti
Minarsih which means loving of women. You
can call me Siti or Asih. I was born on
19th june 1994 in Mulya Asri Village, Lampung. My weight is 50
kilogram. My height is 155 centimeters. I have short hair. My skin color is
brown. I am 19 years old. I was born in a simple family with all the
shortcomings we try to survive. My father’s name is Mukino and my mother’s name is Sriyani. They work as farmers. They work hard
for their young children. I have the one brother only . I was an ordinary girl.
Not pretty but more likely ugly. But I am still grateful to my situation if I see
that there are still many who have compared my shortcomings. I am flexible person with my friends. I am not someone
who is stupid because I can follow each
school activities well and also I've got the first rank
in grade X, ranked
2rd and 3rd, at grade XI, XII in Senior High School. A matter of pride are for me and my parents.
I am not arrogant girl. I am friendly girl. I can
take friends without the promiscuous of friends, then I am also the type of
person who does not talk enough so I looked subdued. But I am not entirely
quiet person. I also can joke with my friends. Sometimes if my mood become bad
good then I will offended easily, and even then only sometime. For now, I live
at the Rambutan street, 15 A, Metro City. In the metro I have boardinghouse, I
has living with a widow who feed their children by selling some cooked
vegetables. She had I think of as my own mother. Actually I do not know the best thing of me. Perhaps that is to be
the best of me was the attitude of patience and keep trying as much as possible
to reach my goal. I have solidarity of feeling and also have the hearts of the
faithful. My hobby is listening to music while singing the song. I am very
interested in my hobbies are listening to music while singing it. I think if I
listen to music I can vent all I experienced a sense of being both happy and
sad. Activities that I do on my spare time I listen to music sometimes, but the
other times I watch my favorite Korean movie. Because I really like movies or
Korean drama’s. Accordingly ,that’s all about my usual self. If there are many mistake.
I say sorry about that. I hope that it can be useful for all of you. And the last I say Thanks a lot for it. Keep spirit
my lovely friends..
Note :
Green Color = Identification
Blue
Color = Description
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