DESCRIBING OF MY SELF

1.     How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity

Paragraph unity here a paragraph implies that it have to needs an idea. Therefore, its explanatory sentences that form paragraphs need to be laid out carefully so that none of the sentences that deviate from the main idea of the paragraph. If there is a sentence that deviates from the subject matter or the main idea of the paragraph, the paragraph it becomes cohesive and intact. Deviant sentences should be repaired or removed from paragraph.

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2.     Tell more about coherence

Coherent paragraphs where the paragraphs of explanatory sentences mutually sustainable. Good paragraph should demonstrate a close relationship between sentences. Paragraphs are constructed from sentences mean jumping the paragraph is not coherent or incoherent. If there is no coherence (coherence), the mind leaps, serial para above is built on four sentences. The first sentence of up to four interconnected because of the sequence of time and place. The above description is one way that the sentence is structured in a coherent paragraph. There are several ways we can do that the sentences in the paragraph which we arrange into a coherent paragraph that is by repeating a word or group of words that have previously been mentioned with a word or group of words with the same or synonyms, and use the pointer word, this, such, that is to say above, and the latter builds a sequence of ideas.

My Usual Self

Actually, I'm confused what should describe  about me. But I’ll try to describe myself. Everything related to me both my strengths and my flaws. Any excess will cover one of its weaknesses. Make your shortcomings as a motive better to be your strong suit so much.  A suburb regions of isolated village is  Mulya Asri  Village, Tulang Bawang Barat of Regency which I was born. My parents gave me name is  Siti  Minarsih which means loving of  women. You can call me Siti or  Asih. I was born on 19^th june 1994 in Mulya Asri Village, Lampung. My weight is 50 kilogram. My height is 155 centimeters. I have short hair. My skin color is brown. I am 19 years old. I was born in a simple family with all the shortcomings we try to survive. My father’s name is  Mukino and my mother’s name is  Sriyani. They work as farmers. They work hard for their young children. I have the one brother only . I was an ordinary girl. Not pretty but more likely ugly. But I am still grateful to my situation if I see that there are still many who have compared my shortcomings. I am flexible person with my friends. I am not someone who is stupid because I can follow each school activities well and also I've got the first rank in grade X, ranked 2^rd and 3^rd, at grade XI, XII in Senior High School. A matter of pride are for me and my parents. I am not arrogant girl. I am friendly girl. I can take friends without the promiscuous of friends, then I am also the type of person who does not talk enough so I looked subdued. But I am not entirely quiet person. I also can joke with my friends. Sometimes if my mood become bad good then I will offended easily, and even then only sometime. For now, I live at the Rambutan street, 15 A, Metro City. In the metro I have boardinghouse, I has living with a widow who feed their children by selling some cooked vegetables. She had I think of as my own mother. Actually I do not know  the best thing of me. Perhaps that is to be the best of me was the attitude of patience and keep trying as much as possible to reach my goal. I have solidarity of feeling and also have the hearts of the faithful. My hobby is listening to music while singing the song. I am very interested in my hobbies are listening to music while singing it. I think if I listen to music I can vent all I experienced a sense of being both happy and sad. Activities that I do on my spare time I listen to music sometimes, but the other times I watch my favorite Korean movie. Because I really like movies or Korean drama’s. Accordingly ,that’s all about my usual self. If there are many mistake. I say sorry about that. I hope that it can be useful for all of you.  And the last I say Thanks a lot for it. Keep spirit my lovely friends..

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