Senin, 07 April 2014

IDENTIFIYING NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH WITH AND WITHOUT TOPIC SENTENCE




IDENTIFYING NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH
Name          : Siti Minarsih
Npm           : 12340030
Subject       ; writing 3
4th semester

                                                     UNFORGETTABLE EXPERIENCES


In the world we live in while. Before we get to live forever Hereafter later . Therefore in every human life, each of them had the experience of both a pleasant experience and unpleasant experience which all of them are part of our valuable experiences. An event or activity can said an experience because it caused us to experience something unusual and that we could not forgot the experience. Exception me, I also had the experience of a very diverse which cannot forgot up to now and it is impossible which able to forgot whenever. The diversity of experience was something what made my life a little more colorful which it was not flat. I had a lot of experience when I was from childhood to adulthood. I lived in a modest family, and therefore I have learned independent life that I was from childhood. I did activities that the other child did not do necessarily. At the time, I was in elementary school , when other kids were playing. I went to rice field to help my lovely parents. The experience was not forgotten until now how my life is so difficult that I was determined to study harder so that my family life was little changed. Not only until there, after I graduated elementary school. I take care of themselves for purposes of entry into junior high school. Why was that ? Because I knew my parents were very busy and I did not want to bother my parents more. I have received at National Junior High School 1 TBT . The humbled experience, humiliated, I ever felt all of them in junior high school . It was enough to made a little uncomfortable and never thought in my mind " why just my life was insulted, whether I was wrong " . But I kept my spirit more.  I was still eager to continued learning until I forwarded to Senior High School . Not only until there, If another child brought a motorcycle to go our school. In the another case, I just brought a bicycle that was not good anymore . And I was thinking " why did I have to live like this , while others did not " I thought it because I was immature . But I never complained to my parents because I was afraid to bother them n made them which are sad. While in  Senior High School. When I was in grade XI , I did a study tour to Jogja - Bali with friends for seven days. The study tour was my beautiful experience . During my life for the first time, I went on vacation out of Sumatra , was also the first time I got on the ship , the first time I went to bali island and many other activities are again as long as when I did a study tour . After I graduated high school, I followed the bidikmisi program for SMPTN but has not been lucky apparently. From there it was , I started to give up because  I was afraid that I could not go to college . In my mind, I wanted to continue studying, but it looked like my father which did not have the fee. And I have started to think to work first. Yet my father wanted to pay my tuition unexpectedly. Then I signed up in the Muhammadiyah University Of Metro , my beloved campus. And I was accepted into the English language courses well.  I and my family were really happy. So that were all of the little experience that I had, I will never forget the experience . Because that experience is the best teacher, we will never be able to do the best without experience. With the experience, we can introspect ourselves if there are mistakes in the past so that we can be a good person to live a good life anyway. I will share my experience later to my children, so they know how the experiences is very important in our life. Thank a lots for the case for me to share my  little experiences. 


Identifying Paragraph
Unforgettable Experiences

Introductory Paragraph


In the world we live in while. Before we get to live forever Hereafter later . Therefore in every human life, each of them had the experience of both a pleasant experience and unpleasant experience which all of them are part of our valuable experiences. An event or activity can said an experience because it caused us to experience something unusual and that we could not forgot the experience. Exception me, I also had the experience of a very diverse which cannot forgot up from the last time to now and it is impossible which able to forgot whenever. The diversity of experience was something what made my life a little more colorful which it was not flat.
Body Paragraph

(Orientation)




















( Complication 1)






















(Resolution 1)




  




(Complication 2)









(Resolution 2)







I had unforgettable experiences. When I was from childhood to adulthood. I lived in a modest family, and therefore I have learned independent life that I was from childhood. I did activities that the other child did not do necessarily. At the time, I was in elementary school, when other kids were playing. I went to rice field to help my lovely parents. The experience was not forgotten until now how my life is so difficult that I was determined to study harder so that my family life was little changed.


I take care of themselves for purposes of entry into junior high school. Why was that? Because I knew my parents were very busy and I did not want to bother my parents more. I have received at National Junior High School 1 TBT. The humbled experience, humiliated, I ever felt all of them in Junior High School. It was enough to made a little uncomfortable and never thought in my mind "why just my life was insulted, whether I was wrong " . And then when I was in Senior High School, If another child brought a motorcycle to go our school. In the another case, I just brought a bicycle that was not good anymore. And I was thinking " why did I have to live like this , while others did not " I thought it because I was immature.


I was patients to do it. I tried that I would keep my spirit more. I was still eager to continued learning until I forwarded to Senior High School . Then I never complained to my parents because I was afraid to bother them n made them which are sad.   


After I graduated in Senior High School, I followed the bidikmisi program for SMPTN but has not been lucky apparently. From there it was, I started to give up because I was afraid that I could not go to college. In my mind, I wanted to continue studying, but it looked like my father which did not have the fee. And I have started to think to work first.


Yet My father wanted to pay my tuition unexpectedly. Then I signedup in the Muhammadiyah University Of Metro, my beloved campus. And I was accepted into the English language courses well. I and my family were really happy.

 Concluding Paragraph

    (Coda)
So that were all of the little experience that I had, I will never forget the experiences. Because that experience is the best teacher, we will never be able to do the best without experience. With the experience, we can introspect ourselves if there are mistakes in the past so that we can be a good person to live a good life anyway. I will share my experience later to my children, so they know how the experiences is very important in our life. Thank a lot for the case for me to share my little experiences.
Note :
·         Black Font :  Introduction
·     Blue Font   :  Plot ( in my writing use reverse chronology)
·         Brown Font : Character ( The character of my writing is I and My father or my parents)
·         Green Font  :  Setting ( time, place)
·        Purple  Font : Climax ( The climax of  my writing is in complication 2)
·         Concluding Paragraph include conclusion
·         The Topic Sentences is I had unforgettable experiences.
·         The Purpose of my writing is “ with the experiences, so that we can introspect ourselves the better than the last moment”


 

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